Diner Flag

Posted by farmermarn (Baltimore, United States) on 20 January 2008 in Cityscape & Urban.

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

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Comments (6)

Kathryn from Edgerton, United States

I really like this photo. I love all the different directions of lines. nice shot

21 Jan 2008 2:03am

GJC from Kyoto, Japan

A very good composition of line and color. I can't decide if the last "panel" with the AC unit is a distraction or not. What do you think? I've put my hand over it and left it as-is, and I'm not quite sure what I'd do. Regardless, it's quite a fine eye to notice the wealth of pattern. Thanks for sharing.

21 Jan 2008 3:30am

farmermarn from Baltimore, United States

I couldn't decide about the AC either, but in the end I left it because it is kind of like a backwards american flag with the rectangle in the upper corner...

21 Jan 2008 10:56am

GJC from Kyoto, Japan

Ahh, well in that case it's even more diabolically clever than I first realized. I therefore rescind my previous comment and applaud a very cool picture.

21 Jan 2008 11:44am

Kathleen from Baltimore, United States

lovin' this one, hon!

25 Jan 2008 2:34pm

Twelvebit from Victoria, United States

I think the metal panels and the contrasting color horizontals are the great parts of this image. I think cropping to remove the A/C and the little bit of door on the left (and maybe along the underside of the handrail) would do two things: 1) make the image a little more mysterious as the first reaction would be to figure out exactly what we're looking at; and 2) strengthen the design by emphasizing the most important elements.

10 Feb 2008 4:15pm

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